What do you think of this song I wrote for my girlfriend?

Hello. I created this rap song for my current girlfriend, please
evaluate it from 1 to 10 stars. Do you think it's presentable, or
should I rewrite it?

Verse 1
Yo girl u be gotten a banging a**
yo know i be diggin it yo
we dun had us lots of good times
especially when i be spittin rhymes
homies always afraid of me
because im so dang cool
yeah dawg check it

Chorus
yo
yo
yo
yo
i love you

Verse 2
yo i know i cheated on yo a** last year homegirl
but im really sincerely sorry iight?
im glad we still tight in our crib yo
i hope our relationship continues to be like this ho

Chorus
yo
yo
yo
yo
i love you

Verse 3
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you

Chorus
yo
yo
yo
yo
i love you